hey Carnotaur i just maked a new part of my fanfic series called Teratophoneus vs Alioramus battle at Yosemite which i think is a improvement over my other one which i still need to fix and what do you think of it like what to imrpove i think something like useing the same word which i know i am bad at but still what do you think.
Yeah i did kind of take some inspiration from battle at big rock mainly for the end and wanted to kind of fcocus on both the wild part of the Dinosaur in the first part while having the ending taking a ever dark almost somewhat horror like end to it.
hello carnotaur its me owerslachlan again and i just would like to bring up that i am starting a new fanfic on the animals which esacped from the mainland/ born on mainland aswell and also can you remvoe the Pygmy Indominus rex page because i want to start a fresh.
It’s alright for what there is now. I think some expansion on the heading size would help. And of course, with every story, there grammar issues, so those can be dealt with. I recommend fixing them now, because when the story is short, it is easier to spot the errors, than if it was longer.
I got some ideas for chapter 19 of Jurassic World: Die Hard. What will happen in that section is Claire, Zach and Gray were taken to the control room. Nolan, along with Chernov and Smith, would torture Claire for her Quadtosaurus code, which she utterly refuses to give up. Nolan angrily grabbed her by the hair and yelled, "LOOK AT ME! I held my wife when that T-rex trampled my car. She died in my arms! She was carrying our daughter. She would have been 18 today! Yet you and your people still clone these abominations when they shouldn't have been brought them back in the first place!". Claire lets out a powerful verbal counterattack, "I'll tell you something. I originally saw them as assets, but when I saw that dying Apatosaurus done by that monster we made on that lab, I placed my hand on it to comfort it and I suddenly realized that these creatures are intelligent, thinking, living creatures. You are killing them with that beast, just like you are killing everyone in the park with it. I won't justify your insanity and obsession with revenge to make you feel better about yourself." Claire would be tortured with hits from Nolan and put her head in a stock tank full of water. She continued to refuse to give up her code. When they threatened Zach and Gray, she breaks and tearfully gives up her code. What do you think of ideas for dialogue and any necessary changes for that part?
What do you think about the short Jurassic World movie? I think it is ironic that one short movie was so much better than the fallen kingdom, but do you rellay think that Allosaurus was fully adult or a subadult?
Remember that post you made about your character Joshua Malcolm? I wanted to share something similar as I’ve been planning him.
And remember that day where I told you the synopsis of my RJW and Splatoon Live Action stories?
I have a character for my Splatoon fanfiction; Josh Sylvermann, the only human that will be appearing in the story. I would want to elaborate on him and his personality like how you did with your character, Joshua Malcolm.
So, Josh Sylvermann is my own original human character for my Splatoon live action fanfiction, as I will go over his character (some of it, since the other stuff are spoilers like his past), and the concept of my live action Splatoon fanfiction.
So if you want to see the fanfiction I’ve been developing, here’s the link.
My Splatoon fanfiction will be based on Nintendo’s video game, Splatoon.
Patrick Johnson will be imagined as Josh Sylvermann, and he will arrive to Earth in the Mollusc Era where humans are extinct, but creatures called Inklings now rule Earth. I will not elaborate on where he came from or his past and origins here, because like I said, those are spoilers, but I will elaborate on his personality and his character.
Even though he does have elements of a survivor character, Josh isn’t exactly like your standard survivor character, or even supposed to resemble a survivor character; he’s shy, reserved, occasionally silent, but kind and loyal once he can trust someone. His flaws are that he has a lack of memory at first when he arrived to Earth, but as the story goes, he slowly starts to remember, but then has serious flashbacks from his past which stress him and makes him behave awkward sometimes, which can be considered an inner struggle. He also hides secrets about his past from the Inklings throughout the story.
Josh represents the need for humankind to explore and discover the unknown, being accepted despite differences, self discovery and learning about oneself, companionship, curiosity and wonder, and living life to the fullest.
However, even if Josh will play an interesting and meaningful role, he will not be the major focus of my Splatoon story, as the story will go to the other main Inklings in my story with their own inner conflicts. Which brings me to my next point.
You may be aware from that day that I said that Clementine and Whinter are from TamarinFrog on Devianart and that even though I credited them, I was thinking about replacing them with OC Inklings to avoid conflict with TamarinFrog. However, very often, I can imagine Josh being friends with Clementine and Whinter throughout their adventures in Inkopolis, in which they will be the key drivers to Josh’s character development, as well as Josh himself being the driver for their character development.
And to the next and probably final point; the whole story being in live action with the characters’ models being realistic. Now, I am aware of the Detective Pikachu and Sonic movie fiasco debate, but I wanted to bring my unique style to the Splatoon universe with this fanfiction, so I had to be careful on how to design the characters. I do want to make them realistic, but not detract from their original models too much nor make them look off putting in the live action setting. However, if there’s one thing that should stay the same straight from the games, is their personality. I may change how they look a little, but their personality is what makes them, and I really want to keep that. In fact, if I keep Clementine and Whinter, then they should keep their personalities as well. For the live action part, it will have a few 3D animated scenes, as well as a 2D animated scene in the Splatoon Artstyle (akin to Dora and the Lost City of Gold’s animated scene), so that it won’t be entirely live action and reference the franchise being animated.
As for my realistic Inkling design, it’s basically a taller and older version of Nintendo’s Inkling (the teen Inklings exist too, and they’re the same height as the Nintendo Inklings), and they’re as tall as a human, but their face is a little more realistic like a human (and what you would usually see when you look up “realistic Inkling” like this), their black eye masks, ears, beak teeth, different noses, small lips, and head tentacles will stay. But their hands and feet will be more tentacle-like. The five fingers are inside and they can move them to grab things, but they’re covered by the tentacle. Also, they will have 3 smaller pairs of arms under their two main arms, and the color of the tip of the arm and leg tentacles will be the same color as the color of the tip of their head tentacle, with the color of the rest of their arms before they transition to the human-colored skin will be the same is the general color of their head tentacles.
What do you think? Do you like what I have in mind? And I can elaborate on my JW fanfiction, Rebuilding Jurassic World, if you want.
So it’s supposed to be based on both Fallen Kingdom and the unreleased Jurassic World III, with JP, TLW:JP, JP3, and JW being the building blocks for this fanfiction. Instead of a movie, it’s going to be a television series comprised of three seasons, with the first season having five episodes and the other two having an unconfirmed number of episodes.
In this alternate universe, Lockwood and Mills have partnered with the American and Costa Rican government to rebuild Jurassic World to keep Hammond’s and Masrani’s dying promise of a dinosaur theme park, but Owen and Claire, alongside several other characters, are not in support of the idea and they will do whatever they can to stop Lockwood’s Jurassic World Restoration Society from completing their goals.
While it will have new original characters of mine, it will use characters from the films, like of course Owen Grady and Claire Dearing, as well as involving Benjamin Lockwood and Eli Mills as the major drivers of this series.
What this fanfiction is supposed to represent is putting the “life finds a way” line to the challenge by pitting humans who seek to bring Lockwood’s desire to life against the very dinosaurs they are trying to capture. This will also try to achieve what Fallen Kingdom had in mind; the treatment of animals, and the use of them for corporate reasons, as well as highlighting the potential of the genetic engineering epidemic for many purposes.
As for the species appearing, Blue will be one of the main star dinosaurs of the series, where Owen joins the protest on the reconstruction to try to save Blue from being captured for the theme park. I will not reveal what exact number of species will be appearing in this fanfiction, but it will surely be a surprise.
The series will have many references from the franchise, combining multiple ideas to form new ones and to implement those concepts into this fanfiction.
The morals and themes of this story are going to be about the battle between Man vs. Nature, Genetics, Confidence, and attempting to achieve one’s goals.
So what do you think?
Also, I read your chapter 11 of Malcholm Woods, and it was really good.
Here's the link to the page in general. Now I'll explain what it's about, since I had the feeling of telling you.
Anyways, Cretaceous Park is a new original IP created by me, and will be told in novel form instead of a Film or TV Show, but its supposed to be inspired by the Jurassic Park/World Franchise, even though this has nothing to do with the JP/JW IP at all.
The original title for the fanfiction was "Jurassic Park: A New Beginning", in reference to this being inspired by Jurassic Park/World, before the title was scrapped for "Cretaceous Park" , which I still feel is a little too similar to the JP/JW Franchise, with some possibly mistaking it as a sequel of some sorts to the JP/JW Trilogies, so I might change it in the future.
The themes that this story will try to show are the concepts of time travel and the morals that come with it, the concepts of alternate evolution and alternate universes. I need to web this together with the story I have in mind now. Also, one of the reviewers of the story, Diabolusaurus127, has stated that he liked the fact that my story contained elements of Pre-Legacy Effects Art Shift, Legacy Effects Art Shift, and Post-Legacy Effects Art Shift (even though I was completely unaware of this and I don't even know the elements of these three art shifts at all).
Anyways, onto the story. It takes place in the future of 2030, and the "alternate universe" concept of it is that humanity have grown so much more technologically advanced than this real life universe, as well as having the concept of "alternate evolution" come into play by revealing that creatures not seen in our world's past has appeared in this alternate universe, leading to a difference of fauna due to the alternate universe concept. The "time travel" concept can be how by 2030, humanity already invented time-travel technology to go back in time to recapture these animals and bring them to the modern day dinosaur theme park for exhibition.
We follow Dr. Brian Guerrituez, a renowned world-class paleontologist who forever marked the history and field of paleontology among the paleontological greats of John Ostrom and Jack Horner. He and his friends, Anna Yiotun and Diego Lakoz, get invited by billionaire and capitalist Jerry Montagiez and his company, Solarial Extraterrestrial Technologies (S.E.L. for short) to visit his dinosaur theme park in Montana, called Cretaceous Park (or whatever title that can be connected here).
However, later on the story, billionaire, capitalist, and rival Ashley Capuleta, will be attempting to hijack Jerry's new theme park and make it fall into disaster with the goal to better her company and try to make S.E.L. look bad to the public, resulting in the survival of our characters from these creatures.
As for the creatures, alongside some aspects of the story, its characters, and the concepts, will be getting a revision sometime in the future, because in my eyes, they may look a little too monstery, especially for one of my three main dinosaur stars; the Dracosaurus, a large 56-foot long tyrannosaurid with a lot of keratinous horns on its head and has a pair of huge wings. The other two are a 49-foot long tyrannosaurid and a man-sized dromaeosaurid inspired by real-life dromaeosaurids like Dakotaraptor.
In the original writing, the Dracosaurus has been described as a more fantastical monster, although I'll change it so that it can be more grounded and natural.
The tone I’ll aim for this story is a more classic, old-style, and novel feeling.
Anyways, I have a lot of other things to say about this in mind, but what do you think of this story?
Wow, that’s a original concept! I always like when someone has a new idea, that doesn’t just rebuild the park again and again, so I think it’s well done. Also, what is the Dracossurus supposed to be, unless you don’t want to spoil it?
Thanks! I know the overall concept is a bit similar to the original Jurassic Park, but I’ll make it as original as possible.
Fun fact: Jerry’s and Ashley’s last names were inspired by the Montagues and Capulets from Romeo and Juliet.
Anyways, as for the Dracosaurus, originally in my old script which is incomplete by the way, it was supposed to be a hybrid alongside a few others, but I’ll change it so that it’s a made up but natural creature that S.E.L. will capture, alongside many other dinosaurs. It’s supposed to be one of the main dinosaur stars.
Anyways, I might evaluate on another original IP of mine, He Who Wields The Magical Sword And Shield, if you’re interested. By the way, I’m updating Episode 2 of Rebuilding Jurassic World, and it’ll take a long while for it to be completed, but I’ll make it good.
HWWTMS&S’s basic premise is that it’s going to be an original IP franchise by me, like Cretaceous Park, but I haven’t fully solidified it, but I do have some concept ideas about it.
First off, it’s going to be fully animated using traditional hand drawn animation and combining it with some 3D animation, like the Disney Renaissance films and films like Atlantis: The Lost Empire and Treasure Planet, only with a more modern and realistic feel (yes, very hard to accomplish I know). However, it’s also going to take inspiration from some films like Joker and video games like Persona 5 for character dynamic, feel, and story.
So for now, the story is still being built up and imagined by me, so don’t expect too much, but we follow the high-school aged main protagonist (don’t know what name I’ll give him yet) who lives in this all-happy society where nothing’s ever wrong and it’s all perfect, and it’s Medieval themed. However, our protagonist then starts to slowly but unknowingly see it’s reality, whether its episodes of seeing the opposite of this “happy” society, or just flat out feels that something is just not right, sensing a phenomena that appears to be illusioning the society around him (can’t reveal more because spoilers and I’m not sure of posting it).
He then returns to this supposed illusion of reality but still feels that something’s wrong due to his experiences, and goes on a quest to find the legendary fabled Sword and Shield and equips new friends (one of them being Aildred, don’t know the other three) as they go on a journey to discover the truth about the society he once lived in and the leader who is the head of the society.
The themes found in this are going to be Medieval-themed, some elements of American History, and setting of the modern day world and its flaws. Like taking the medieval monarchy and mixing it with the modern day setting with major technological advancements, like how Treasure Planet mixed Pirate themes with futuristic space. Also, the story will have some hints that has to do with outer space. Also, another theme is that it will take modern politics, like identity politics, and use that as a warning to make this somewhat of a cautionary tale to society in that what happens if politics of very controversial subjects take control of higher ranks in society (I don’t want you and other people to get the wrong idea).
I also imagined a sequel to this, but won’t reveal anything. I want the story and its events to feel like what you would read from a history book and anime. Also, I imagined the names of two characters so far; Aildred (a friend of our protagonist) and Zerox. I don’t know what rating it’s goong to be, but maybe a PG-13 Rating will do.
What do you think about this? It’s sure to spark some major debates like the Joker film did.
Huh, that’s really something! I see you put a lot of thought into your works, which is quite nice.
Also, Incase your interested I have finished my revisions of the first 4 chapters of MW, and will publish the final one soon. Chapter 12 is almost complete, but I feel if I publish it too soon, it won’t get The feedback that MW used to receive; I feel like the anticipation of the novel had pretty much died. Do you feel the same? I’m not going to end the novel, but I wish I could get the hype back.
For my Splatoon Live Action film, I thought about Josh’s origins recently and how he comes from outer space.
So I kept in mind that one of Splatoon’s characters, Judd, a cat, is in Inkopolis because he was cryogenically frozen by the humans 10,000 years before the Mollusc Era. So, I’ll change Josh’s and his past’s (won’t reveal anything yet) origins to being cryogenically frozen, with Josh waking up from his cryogenic slumber somehow.
That way, I can keep Josh and his mysterious inner struggle with his past and be more faithful to Splatoon’s theme.
Also, I might imagine Raf Grassetti to be the designer of the Splatoon characters and my thoughts for their designs.
I figured about the design for the Inklings in my Splatoon story. So I considered removing the three pairs of arms under their two main arms, but I’m on the fence about it. I’ll figure this out later, but I’m letting you know.
This can help out. It gives a general history and knowledge of the Splatoon franchise, while the Splatoon wikia can help too.
Also, you can watch YouTube videos of Splatoon gameplay, both the main objective of the franchise (Inklings covering as much ink in an area as possible) and the campaign of the first game, including its sequel, Splatoon 2.
Okay, some updates to HWWTMS&S; the main protagonist is now college-aged instead of high school, and the "perfect society" is not Medieval-themed. It will still have Medieval-themed elements in it, but these are the changes I made so far while thinking about it.
I don’t think the “Magical” would have fit the epic, maestro, thought-and-feel-provoking, eventful, and serious tone of the story. It would have cheapened the anticipation and made it feel like for kids.
I won’t reveal the names for now, but I’m working on the whole story.
I have more updates on my He Who Wields The Medal, Sword, And Shield story. It finally has an official synopsis and the protagonist finally has a name.
In a society as flawless as it can be, the modern world is at ultimate peace and heaven like no other in 2040. Freedom, love, and trust is in every crevice and pocket of Earth, guided by the powerful government that keeps the planet safe, and no lie or negative feeling even exists on a single tiny crumb of the ground. Harvilton University student Altono Royano, however, doesn't feel exactly that way, somehow sensing that it is not like what it seems...
Altono Royano will be the name of the protagonist throughout the story, and I'm developing ideas for this story and the overall arching franchise.
Also, I've been watching some soundtrack videos of World of Hans Zimmer's Lion King Theme and Joker 2019's "Bathroom Dance" and "Call Me Joker", and I feel like they perfectly fit HWWTMS&S's soundtrack and overall feel, although obviously they won't be used, and Daryl Leigh Lynn, who created some amazing JW fan music, is imagined to be the composer for the story.